Comic 271 - Revision history

66.87.5.248: /* Panel 2 */

2007-04-24T05:50:08Z

Panel 2

2007-04-24T05:49:21Z

Panel 2

2007-04-12T14:34:10Z

Fun Facts

2007-04-12T14:33:23Z

Fun Facts

2007-04-11T10:46:20Z

2007-04-11T05:11:02Z

2007-04-11T05:04:13Z

Panel 2

2007-04-11T05:02:11Z

2007-04-11T04:35:19Z

Transcript

2007-04-10T21:03:50Z

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 Steve: "I am off to discover the fabled graveyard of the elephants, a secret location where, legend has it, all elephants go to die!"<br />
-Beaver: "Cool! Why?"
+Beaver: "Coo! Why?"
 ======Panel 3======

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 Steve: "I am off to discover the fabled graveyard of the elephants, a secret location where, legend has it, all elephants go to die!"<br />
-Beaver: "Coo! Why?"
+Beaver: "Cool! Why?"
 ======Panel 3======

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 ==Fun Facts==
-* When snails die, they go to heaven, unburdened by the weight they carried with them in life. On the other hand slugs, well known for leading lives of sin and debauchery, are doomed to labour beneath shells of lead for all eternity in hell. Salty hell.
+* When snails die, they go to heaven, finally freed from the weight they carried with them in life. On the other hand slugs, well known for leading lives of sin and debauchery, are doomed to labour beneath shells of lead for all eternity in hell. Salty hell.
 ==References==

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 ==Fun Facts==
-* When snails die, they go to heaven
+* When snails die, they go to heaven, unburdened by the weight they carried with them in life. On the other hand slugs, well known for leading lives of sin and debauchery, are doomed to labour beneath shells of lead for all eternity in hell. Salty hell.
 ==References==

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 Beaver: "Ooh - Where are you off to Steve?"<br />
-Steve walks with a PURPOSEFULL STRIDE with his SAFARI GEAR on.
+Steve walks with a PURPOSEFUL STRIDE with his SAFARI GEAR on.
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 '''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]]
-'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[CRAWL]]"
+'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[CRAWL]]", "[[DEAD]]"
 '''Number of panels:''' 10

â† Older revision		Revision as of 05:02, 11 April 2007
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	'''Link:''' {{Comic\|271}}		'''Link:''' {{Comic\|271}}

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 Beaver: "Ooh - Where are you off to Steve?"<br />
 Steve walks with a PURPOSEFULL STRIDE with his SAFARI GEAR on.
@@ Line 27: / Line 26: @@
 Steve: "I am off to discover the fabled graveyard of the elephants, a secret locatation where, legnend has it, all elephants go to die!"<br />
 Beaver: "Coo! Why?"
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 Steve: "For the ivory!"<br />
 Ivory tusks appear in Steve's eyes.
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 And so...<br />
 Steve: "Behold! The graveyard of the elephants!"<br />
 Steve exclaims in a cavern.
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 Beaver and Steve stand in cave among snails.<br />
 Beaver holds a (dead?) snail.<br />
 Beaver: "Actually Steve, I think this is the graveyard of the snails."<br />
 Steve stands perlexed.<br />
 Beaver points at snail.<br />
 Steve: "Are you sure? Couldn't they just be small, swirly elephants?"
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 Beaver: "No, look!"<br />
 Snail crawls into scene.<br />
 Steve looks perplexed.
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 Snail falls over DEAD.<br />
 Steve: "Gasp!"
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 Steve: "Damn those perspicacious pachyderms! I'll find their graveyard yet!"<br />
 Beaver kneels down to dead snail.<br />
 Beaver: "Rest well, noble beast. Sniff!"<br />
 Snail spirit rises out of snail body.<br />
 ==Fun Facts==

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 '''Summary:''' Beaver and Steve search for the Graveyard of the Elephants, but find snails.
-'''Cast:''' [[BEAVER]], [[STEVE]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]]
 '''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[CRAWL]]"