Comic 255 - Revision history

Justas at 14:21, 10 February 2007

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Pcj at 14:27, 26 January 2007

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84.61.143.47: Auto-generated by the comic page creator - Dialogue and scene descriptions

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'''Link:''' {{Comic|255}}

'''Translations:''' {{Translations}}

'''Title:''' GUEST STRIP! by Patrick Alexander

'''Date:''' [[January]] 23, 2007

'''Summary:''' While Beaver makes two prophecies only the one regarding confectionary ingestion turns out to be accurate.

'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]]

'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[Fwoomph|Fwoomph!]]", "[[wiggle]]", "[[Squeeeeeeeeeeeeze|Squeeeeeeeeeeeeze!!]]", "[[Pow|Pow!]]"

'''Number of panels:''' 7
 
==Transcript==

======Panel 1======

Steve holds a box of candy labeled "YUMS". 
 
Beaver has one finger in the air and is pontificating. 
Beaver: "Don't eat that candy, Steve. You'll get Fat!" 
Steve: "You're not my Dad!!"

======Panel 2======

Steve flips a red candy into his mouth.

======Panel 3======

To his surprise Steve FWOOMPH!s into a giant green ball. 
Beaver looks extremely angry. 
Beaver: "What did I tell you!??"

======Panel 4======

Beaver is his amiable self again and moves to embrace Steve. 
Beaver: "Don't worry old friend - I will cure you with hugs!" 
Steve happily WIGGLEs what is still visible of his arms. 
Steve: "Yaaay!"

======Panel 5======

Beaver SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEZE!!s the inflated Steve.

======Panel 6======

Something explodes with a POW!

======Panel 7======

Beaver looks at his hands in horror. There are parts of Steve all over him. Apart from Steve's head there is nothing left of him but green shreds. 
Steve: "... B-Beaver?" 
Steve: "Beaver, am I pretty again?"

==Fun Facts==

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==References==

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 __NOTOC__
 '''Link:''' {{Comic|255}}
@@ Line 8: / Line 9: @@
 '''Date:''' [[January]] 23, 2007
-'''Summary:''' Steve's overeating habits cause him to be obese.  Beaver attempts to cure him with hugs.
+'''Summary:''' Steve experiences a sudden case of acute obesity. Beaver attempts to cure him with hugs.
 '''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]]
-'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[Fwoomph|Fwoomph!]]", "[[wiggle]]", "[[Squeeeeeeeeeeeeze|Squeeeeeeeeeeeeze!!]]", "[[Pow|Pow!]]"
+'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[FWOOMPH|FWOOMPH!]]", "[[WIGGLE]]", "[[SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEZE|SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEZE!!]]", "[[POW|POW!]]"
 '''Number of panels:''' 7
@@ Line 21: / Line 22: @@
 Steve holds a box of candy labeled "YUMS".<br />
 Beaver has one finger in the air and is pontificating.<br />
-Beaver: "Don't eat that candy, Steve. You'll get Fat!"<br />
+Beaver: "Don't eat that candy, Steve. You'll get fat!"<br />
-Steve: "You're not my Dad!!"
+Steve: "YOU'RE NOT MY DAD!!"
 ======Panel 2======
@@ Line 32: / Line 32: @@
 ======Panel 3======
-To his surprise Steve FWOOMPH!s into a giant green ball.<br />
+To his surprise, Steve FWOOMPH!s into a giant round green ball.<br />
 Beaver looks extremely angry.<br />
 Beaver: "What did I tell you!??"
@@ Line 41: / Line 41: @@
 Beaver: "Don't worry old friend - I will cure you with hugs!"<br />
 Steve happily WIGGLEs what is still visible of his arms.<br />
-Steve: "Yaaay!"
+Steve: "YAAAY!"
 ======Panel 5======
@@ Line 49: / Line 49: @@
 ======Panel 6======
-Something explodes with a POW!
+Steve explodes with a POW!
 ======Panel 7======