Comic 249 - Revision history

84.50.160.5 at 20:45, 8 January 2007

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 '''Date:''' [[January]] 2, 2007
-'''Summary:''' Intestinal gift exchanges lead to an unexpected esacpe from the snowman.
+'''Summary:''' Intestinal gift exchanges lead to an unexpected escape from the snowman.
-'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Snowman]], [[Steves Snowman]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Snowman]], [[Steve's Snowman]]
-'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[SWOOSH]]", "[[HISS]]", "[[CRACKLE]]", "[[BLOIK]]", "[[SPLOOSH]]", "[[TWITCH]]"
+'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[SWOOSH|SWOOSH!]]", "[[HISS|HISS!]]", "[[CRACKLE|CRACKLE!]]", "[[BLOIK|BLOIK!]]", "[[SPLOOOSH|SPLOOOSH!]]", "[[TWITCH]]"
-'''"[[Fin]]" style:''' Snowmen, with hats scarfs and corncob pipes
+'''"[[Fin]]" style:''' Snowmen, with hats, scarfs and corncob pipes
 '''Number of panels:''' 10
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 Beaver: "Oh well, at least we can still open our Christmas presents! Here's one for you!"<br />
 Steve: "Oh! Presents!"
 ======Panel 3======
 Steve: "Oh! Grit! How did you know?"<br />
 Beaver: "Let's just say a little bird told me..."
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 ======Panel 4======
-Weeks Earlier...<br />
+[2 Weeks Earlier...]<br />
-Beaver: "Hmmm...." While reading Steve's wishlist on Amazon.co.uk
+Beaver: (reading Steve's wishlist on [http://www.amazon.co.uk Amazon.co.uk]) "Hmmm...."
 ======Panel 5======
-Steve: "WEE HEE HEE HEE HEE!" While SWOOSHing the open bucket of grit into the air.<br />
+Steve: (excitedly SWOOSHing the open bucket of grit into the air)"WEE HEE HEE HEE HEE!"<br />
 Beaver: "Careful Steve!  You'll spill it!"
 ======Panel 6======
-The dropped bucket of grit HISSes and CRACKLEs on the ground.<br />
+The dropped bucket of grit HISS!es and CRACKLE!s on the ground.<br />
 Beaver: "See Steve, this is why you can't have nice things."<br />
 Steve: "Oop."
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 ======Panel 7======
-Snowman: "Oh dear..." While holding his BLOIKing belly.
+Snowman: (holding his BLOIK!ing belly) "Oh dear..."
 ======Panel 8======
-Snowman: "I'm meltiiiing!" As his belly ruptures with a SPLOOOSH and sends Beaver and Steve flying out in a jet of water.
+The snowman's belly ruptures with a SPLOOOSH! and sends Beaver and Steve flying out in a jet of water.<br />
 ======Panel 9======
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 Beaver: "We did it! We're free! Christmas is saved!"<br />
 Steve: "Yay! Mincepies all round!"<br />
-Snowman: "Bah, Humbug"
+Snowman: "Bah, humbug."
 ======Panel 10======
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 Steve: "And look!  My snowman came alive too!  This is the best Christmas ever!"<br />
 Steve's Snowman: "Kiiill meee..."<br />
-Steve: "Merry Christmas Everyone!"
+Steve: "Merry Christmas everyone!"
 ==Fun Facts==
-* Grit happens to be minute rough granules, as of sand or stone.<br />
+* Steve's grit seems to be minute rough granules, as of sand or stone.
-Spreading grit on snow is a common practice to stop from slipping - though it's not known for it's melting abilities.<br />
+* Spreading grit on snow is a common practice to stop from slipping.
-Amazon.co.uk don't sell grit, but do sell three audio CDs with that title.
+* Although snow does melt when coated with a dark substance due to it absorbing more energy from the [[Sun]], there was no sunlight inside the snowman's belly. Unfeasible!
 * The last time Beaver and Steve played with pies it was in [[Comic 76]], a guest strip by [[Joe Dunn]]
 * Steve's snowman still has his carrot nose, although it was burped out by Beaver's snowman in [[Comic 246]].
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 ==References==
-Bah, Humbug is the phrase [[Wikipedia: Ebenezer Scrooge|Ebenezer Scrooge]] uses to express his disgust with Christmas traditions.
+"Bah, humbug" is the phrase [[Wikipedia:Ebenezer Scrooge|Ebenezer Scrooge]] uses to express his disgust with Christmas traditions.
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 ==References==
-Bah, Humbug is the phrase [[Wikipedia: Ebenezer Scrooge|Ebenezer Scrooge]] use to express his disgust with Christmas traditions.
+Bah, Humbug is the phrase [[Wikipedia: Ebenezer Scrooge|Ebenezer Scrooge]] uses to express his disgust with Christmas traditions.
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 ==References==
-Bah, Humbug is the phrase [[Wikipedia: Ebenezer Scrooge|Ebenezer Scrooger]] use to express his disgust with Christmas traditions.
+Bah, Humbug is the phrase [[Wikipedia: Ebenezer Scrooge|Ebenezer Scrooge]] use to express his disgust with Christmas traditions.
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 ======Panel 1======
-Beaver, Steve and the Christmas tree lay slumped in the belly of the snowman.
+Beaver, Steve and the Christmas tree lie slumped in the belly of the snowman.
 ======Panel 2======

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 '''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[SWOOSH]]", "[[HISS]]", "[[CRACKLE]]", "[[BLOIK]]", "[[SPLOOSH]]", "[[TWITCH]]"
-'''"[[Fin]]" style:''' Snowmen, wins hats scarfs and corncob pipes
+'''"[[Fin]]" style:''' Snowmen, with hats scarfs and corncob pipes
 '''Number of panels:''' 10