Comic 231 - Revision history

Pcj: Reverted edits by Edward518 (Talk); changed back to last version by 137.122.73.10

2008-01-08T15:03:10Z

Reverted edits by Edward518 (Talk); changed back to last version by 137.122.73.10

Edward518 at 10:38, 8 January 2008

2008-01-08T10:38:08Z

137.122.73.10: /* Fun Facts */

2006-10-24T00:52:32Z

Fun Facts

Eruditebaboon: corrected robot names. Inserted beard FACT.

2006-10-23T16:53:09Z

corrected robot names. Inserted beard FACT.

69.159.77.129 at 22:59, 20 October 2006

2006-10-20T22:59:21Z

Errick: /* Panel 6 */ Looks more like a fu manchu to me, but it could be either

2006-10-20T16:48:55Z

Panel 6: Looks more like a fu manchu to me, but it could be either

Justas at 16:07, 20 October 2006

2006-10-20T16:07:23Z

217.116.239.3: /* Fun Facts */

2006-10-20T14:37:00Z

Fun Facts

217.116.239.3 at 14:35, 20 October 2006

2006-10-20T14:35:18Z

217.116.239.3 at 14:34, 20 October 2006

2006-10-20T14:34:39Z

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@@ Line 77: / Line 77: @@
 ==Fun Facts==
-*The futuristic nantochnology allows Steve's facial hair to reconfigure automatically according to his moods.
+*The futuristic nanotechnology allows Steve's facial hair to reconfigure automatically according to his moods.
 *Steve, having given Beaver the future-receptacle, is probably the organ smuggler.

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 __NOTOC__
-[[Image:231_4.png|frame|Cruel Evil Robots from the future are cruel and evil]]
+[[Image:231_4.png|frame|Evil Robots from the future are cruel and evil]]
 '''Link:''' {{Comic|231}}
@@ Line 9: / Line 9: @@
 '''Date:''' [[October]] 20, 2006
-'''Summary:''' The cruel evil robots show up for organ harvesting
+'''Summary:''' The evil robots from the future show up for organ harvesting
-'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Infinitely More Cruel Evil Robot From The Future]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Evil Robot From The Future]]
 '''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[GRRR|GRRR!]]", "[[CRUNNNCH|CRUNNNCH!]]", "[[SQUEEZE]]"
@@ Line 40: / Line 40: @@
 ======Panel 4======
-With a CRUNNNCH! an Infinitely More Cruel Evil Robot From The Future comes through the wall.<br />
+With a CRUNNNCH! an Evil Robot From The Future comes through the wall.<br />
-Evil Robot: "Puny flesh creatures! This is a routine organ harvest! Remain calm. Do not attempt to stimulate your primitive adrenal glands."
+Evil Robot From the Future: "Puny flesh creatures! This is a routine organ harvest! Remain calm. Do not attempt to stimulate your primitive adrenal glands."
 ======Panel 5======
@@ Line 53: / Line 53: @@
 ======Panel 6======
-Evil Robot: "So feeble organic lifeform, do you have any organs to harvest?"<br />
+Evil Robot From the Future: "So feeble organic lifeform, do you have any organs to harvest?"<br />
 Steve opens up his body to show his organs has been replaced by clockwork.<br />
 Steve: "Not me, I've gone clockwork. You might want to check the beaver though"<br />
@@ Line 60: / Line 60: @@
 ======Panel 7======
-Evil Robot: "What about you, puny... Saaay... What's in that future receptacle?"<br />
+Evil Robot From the Future: "What about you, puny... Saaay... What's in that future receptacle?"<br />
 Beaver: "Um.."
 ======Panel 8======
-The Evil Robot opens the future receptacle.<br />
+The Evil Robot From the Future opens the future receptacle.<br />
-Evil Robot: "LIVERS! So you're the organ smuggler we've been looking for!"
+Evil Robot From the Future: "LIVERS! So you're the organ smuggler we've been looking for!"
 ======Panel 9======
-Evil Robot: "Do you know how many starving evil robots this much liver juice could have lubricated? Your filthy organic greed is overloading my disgust circuits!"<br />
+Evil Robot From the Future: "Do you know how many starving evil robots this much liver juice could have lubricated? Your filthy organic greed is overloading my disgust circuits!"<br />
 Steve: "For shame!"<br />
-Evil Robot: "Take him to the detention centre to await <u>pulverization</u>!"<br />
+Evil Robot From the Future: "Take him to the detention centre to await <u>pulverization</u>!"<br />
 Steve's beard is now a what appears to be an anchor.
 ==Fun Facts==
-*With futuristic technologies Steve has many convincing looking false beards.
+*The futuristic nantochnology allows Steve's facial hair to reconfigure automatically according to his moods.
 *Steve, having given Beaver the future-receptacle, is probably the organ smuggler.

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	*With futuristic technologies Steve has many convincing looking false beards.		*With futuristic technologies Steve has many convincing looking false beards.
		+	*Steve, having given Beaver the future-receptacle, is probably the organ smuggler.

	==References==		==References==

@@ Line 11: / Line 11: @@
 '''Summary:''' The cruel evil robots show up for organ harvesting
-'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Cruel Evil Robot]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Infinitely More Cruel Evil Robot From The Future]]
 '''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[GRRR|GRRR!]]", "[[CRUNNNCH|CRUNNNCH!]]", "[[SQUEEZE]]"
@@ Line 21: / Line 21: @@
 ======Panel 1======
-Beaver: "So wï¿½hat else has happende while I've been in a coma?"<br />
+Beaver: "So what else has happened while I've been in a coma?"<br />
-Steve: "The earth was enslaved by a race of sentient evil mutant space potatoes!"<br />
+Steve: "The Earth was enslaved by a race of Sentient Evil Mutant Space Potatoes!"<br />
-The image of an evil mutant space potato appears wit a GRRR!.<br />
+The image of an evil mutant space potato appears with a GRRR!<br />
-Steves beard is a long grey chin curtain.
+Steve's beard is a long grey chin curtain.
 ======Panel 2======
@@ Line 30: / Line 30: @@
 Beaver: "OH NO!"<br />
 Steve: "Oh don't worry, they're long gone now."<br />
-Steves beard is now a moustache.
+Steve's beard is now a moustache.
 ======Panel 3======
 Beaver: ""Phew! You had me worried there!"<br />
-Steve: "Yes, once the infinetely more cruel evel robots form the future took over they soon got rid of the potatoes..."<br />
+Steve: "Yes, once the Infinitely More Cruel Evil Robots From The Future took over they soon got rid of the potatoes..."<br />
-Steves beard is now a brown petite goatie.
+Steve's beard is now a brown petite goatie.
 ======Panel 4======
-With a CRUNNNCH! a cruel evil robot from the future comes through the wall.<br />
+With a CRUNNNCH! an Infinitely More Cruel Evil Robot From The Future comes through the wall.<br />
-Cruel Evil Robot: "Puny flesh creatures! This is a routine organ harvest! Remain calm. Do not attempt to stimulate your primitive adrenal glands."
+Evil Robot: "Puny flesh creatures! This is a routine organ harvest! Remain calm. Do not attempt to stimulate your primitive adrenal glands."
 ======Panel 5======
-Steve: "Oh no! What do we do future Steve?"<br />
+Steve: "Oh no! What do we do Future Steve?"<br />
 Beaver: "Don't worry Beaver, I'll handle it! Just hold on to this future-receptacle"<br />
 Steve, now sporting a short boxed beard, hands Beaver a future receptacle.<br />
 Beaver: "That's a cooler box"<br />
-Steve: "A future cooler box!"
+Steve: "A <u>future</u> cooler box!"
 ======Panel 6======
-Cruel Evil Robot: "So feeble organic lifeform, do you have any organs to harvest?"<br />
+Evil Robot: "So feeble organic lifeform, do you have any organs to harvest?"<br />
 Steve: "Not me, I've gone clockwork. You might want to check the beaver though"<br />
-Steve opens up his body to show his organs has been replaced by clockwork.<br />
+Steve's beard is now a Napoleon III imperial.
-Steves beard is now a Napoleaon III imperial.
 ======Panel 7======
-Cruel Evil Robot: "What about you, puny... Saaay... What's in that future receptacle?"<br />
+Evil Robot: "What about you, puny... Saaay... What's in that future receptacle?"<br />
 Beaver: "Um.."
 ======Panel 8======
-The cruel Evil Robot opens the future receptacle<br />
+The Evil Robot opens the future receptacle.<br />
-Cruel Evil Robot: "LIVERS! So you're the organ smuggler we've been looking for!"
+Evil Robot: "LIVERS! So you're the organ smuggler we've been looking for!"
 ======Panel 9======
-Cruel Evil Robot: "Do you know how many starving evil robots this much liver juice could have lubricated? Your filthy organic greed is overloading my disgust circuits!"<br />
+Evil Robot: "Do you know how many starving evil robots this much liver juice could have lubricated? Your filthy organic greed is overloading my disgust circuits!"<br />
 Steve: "For shame!"<br />
-Cruel Evil Robot: "Take him to the detention centre to await pulverization!"<br />
+Evil Robot: "Take him to the detention centre to await <u>pulverization</u>!"<br />
-Steves beard is now a what appears to be an anchor.
+Steve's beard is now a what appears to be an anchor.
 ==Fun Facts==
-According to [[comic 222]] the future is inhabited by [[Future Jellyfish]]
+*With futuristic technologies Steve has many convincing looking false beards.
-−
 With futuristic technologies Steve has many convincing looking false beards
 ==References==
-None.
+*The Evil Robot may be the same kind that troubled Beaver and Steve in [[Comic 133]].
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	According to [[comic 222]] the future is inhabited by [[Future Jellyfish]]		According to [[comic 222]] the future is inhabited by [[Future Jellyfish]]
		+
		+	With futuristic technologies Steve has many convincing looking false beards

	==References==		==References==

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	'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias\|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[GRRR\|GRRR!]]", "[[CRUNNNCH\|CRUNNNCH!]]", "[[SQUEEZE]]"		'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias\|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[GRRR\|GRRR!]]", "[[CRUNNNCH\|CRUNNNCH!]]", "[[SQUEEZE]]"
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−	~~'''"[[Fin]]" style:''' to be cont!~~

	'''Number of panels:''' 9		'''Number of panels:''' 9