Comic 215 - Revision history

70.53.64.183 at 05:11, 3 September 2006

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AARST at 19:37, 29 August 2006

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Justas at 18:17, 25 August 2006

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 * Crashing into a spacestation can be considered as a succesful docking.
 * Beaver and Steve are trying to say the Shoe Goblin is predictable.
 * Steve knows how to get food through a space suit helmet.
 * Apparently, there IS sound in Space (namely CRUNCH).

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 * You need spacesuits inside space rockets and space stations, too.
 * Steve knows how to get food through a space suit helmet.
 ==References==

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 '''Date:''' [[August]] 25, 2006
-'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Shoe Goblin]], [[Shoe Robots]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Shoe Goblin]], [[Shoe-bots]]
 '''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[WIGGLE]]", "[[SQUISH]]", "[[CRUNCH]]", "[[EMERGE|EMERGE!]]", "[[LOOM|LOOM!]]", "[[CLANK]]", "[[RRRR]]"

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 * Beaver and Steve are trying to say the Shoe Goblin is predictable.
 * You need spacesuits inside space rockets and space stations, too.
 ==References==

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 * Crashing into a spacestation can be considered as a succesful docking.
 * Beaver and Steve are trying to say the Shoe Goblin is predictable.
 ==References==

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 __NOTOC__
 '''Link:''' {{Comic|215}}
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 '''Date:''' [[August]] 25, 2006
-'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Shoe Goblin]], [[Shoe Robot]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Shoe Goblin]], [[Shoe Robots]]
-'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[WIGGLE]]", "[[SQUISH]]", "[[CRUNCH]]",
+'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[WIGGLE]]", "[[SQUISH]]", "[[CRUNCH]]", "[[EMERGE|EMERGE!]]", "[[LOOM|LOOM!]]", "[[CLANK]]", "[[RRRR]]"
-"[[EMERGE]]", "[[LOOM]]", "[[CLANK]]" .
 '''Number of panels:''' 8
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 Beaver looks thoughtful.<br />
-Beaver: "You know, it's just a guess, but maybe that giant shoe-rack-shaped space station is where the shoe goblin is hiding..."<br />
+Beaver: "You know, it's just a guess, but maybe that giant shoe-rack-shaped space station is where the Shoe Goblin is hiding..."<br />
 Beaver: "Initiate docking procedure!"<br />
 Steve WIGGLEs a sausage and SQUISHes a fried egg.<br />
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 ======Panel 2======
-Ship flies towards station.
+The space rocket flies towards the station.
 ======Panel 3======
-Ship CRUNCHes into station.<br />
+The space rocket CRUNCHes into the station.<br />
 Steve: "Docking Complete!"
 ======Panel 4======
-Shoe goblin stands in doorway.Beaver and Steve stand by ship poking though wall.<br />
+Shoe Goblin stands in the doorway. Beaver and Steve stand by the space rocket that's poking though the wall.<br />
 Steve is eating something.<br />
-Shoe goblin: "So, it seems ye have found my secret lair"<br />
+Shoe Goblin: "So, it seems ye have found my secret lair.."<br />
-Beaver: "Shoe goblin!"<br />
+Beaver: "Shoe Goblin!"<br />
 Beaver: "Whatever you're planning to do you won't get away with it!"
 ======Panel 5======
-Shoe goblin: "Perhaps ye'd like to debate that matter with my two mechanical friends..."<br />
+Shoe Goblin: "Perhaps ye'd like to debate that matter with my two mechanical friends.."<br />
-Shoe goblin: "I think ye'll find they have a little suprise for ye..."<br />
+Shoe Goblin: "I think ye'll find they have a little suprise for ye..."<br />
-Two huge robots LOOM and EMERGE from the shadows in the doorway, and their feet CLANK. Their heads cannot be seen.
+Two huge robots LOOM! and EMERGE! from the shadows in the doorway, and their feet CLANK. Their heads cannot be seen.
 ======Panel 6======
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 ======Panel 7======
-Shoe goblin looks nervous.<br />
+Shoe Goblin looks nervous.<br />
-Shoe goblin:Well, I, uh... not shoes exactly..."
+Shoe Goblin: "Well, I, uh... not shoes exactly..."
 ======Panel 8======
 The two robots reveal theirs heads to be shoes.<br />
-Shoe goblin: "Alright, alright, the suprise be that they have shoes for heads."<br />
+Shoe Goblin: "Alright, alright, the suprise be that they have shoes for heads."<br />
-Shoe goblin: "What are ye trying to say?"<br />
+Shoe Goblin: "What are ye trying to say?"<br />
-[To be continued]
+[To be contd.]
 ==Fun Facts==

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 * Apparently, the Shoe Goblin has become a Cyborg.
 * The Shoe Goblin likes shoes a lot. Perhaps too much.
 ==References==