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Panel 4: Added WIBL and WOBL onomatopoeias

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__NOTOC__
'''Link:''' {{Comic|214}}

'''Translations:''' {{Translations}}

'''Title:''' the revenge of the SHOE GOBLIN - part 6

'''Date:''' [[August]] 22, 2006

'''Summary:''' Beaver and Steve approach the mysterious Shoe-Space Base!

'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]]

'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[BLANK|BLANK!]]", "[[WIBL]]", "[[WOBL]] , "[[FLOAT]]"

'''Number of panels:''' 4
 
==Transcript==

======Panel 1======

Beaver and Steve are in their Spaceship somewhere in the Earth`s Orbit. 
Beaver: "We made it! Do you think this thing will hold together?" 

======Panel 2======

Steve: "Don`t worry Beaver, meringue integrit is at 98 percent and holding.." 
Beaver reponds while floating in space: "Wait, what's that?"

======Panel 3======

Both look out of the ship`s window. 
Steve: "There's nothing on the radar..." 
Beaver: "It'.. No, it can't be..."

======Panel 4======

They both see a Giant Shoe Rack! Indeed. 
Beaver: "It is! It's a giant shoe rack!" 
Steave: "That's noe shoe rack...That's a space station!" 
Steve offers Beaver some jelly from the jelly-made radar. 
Steve: "Jelly?".

==Fun Facts==

Spaceships made of food can really fly and travel through space!

==References==

None.

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 Beaver: "It is! It's a giant shoe rack!"<br />
 Steave: "That's no shoe rack... That's a space station!"<br />
-Steve offers Beaver some jelly from the jelly-made radar.<br />
+Steve offers Beaver a WiBLing, WOBLing spoonful of jelly from the jelly-made radar.<br />
 Steve: "Jelly?"<br />
 [To be contd.]

â† Older revision		Revision as of 20:43, 28 August 2006
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	*Spaceships made of food can really fly and travel through space!		*Spaceships made of food can really fly and travel through space!
		+	*Jelly does not make good radar. Though it is possible it was merely jammed.

	==References==		==References==

â† Older revision		Revision as of 20:08, 23 August 2006
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	==References==		==References==
		+	*In Star Wars: A New Hope, Obi-Wan exclaims, "That's no Moon. It's a space station." The last line is a reference to that.

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 __NOTOC__
 '''Link:''' {{Comic|214}}
@@ Line 8: / Line 9: @@
 '''Date:''' [[August]] 22, 2006
-'''Summary:''' Beaver and Steve approach the mysterious Shoe-Space Base!
+'''Summary:''' Beaver and Steve approach the mysterious Giant Shoe Rack Space Base!
 '''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]]
-'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[BLANK|BLANK!]]", "[[WIBL]]", "[[WOBL]] , "[[FLOAT]]"
+'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[FLOAT]]", "[[BLANK|BLANK!]]", "[[WIBL]]", "[[WOBL]]"
 '''Number of panels:''' 4
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 ======Panel 1======
-Beaver and Steve are in their Spaceship somewhere in the Earth`s Orbit.<br />
+[Somewhere in Earth's orbit...]<br />
-Beaver: "We made it! Do you think this thing will hold together?"<br />
+Beaver and Steve are in Steve's space rocket.<br />
 Beaver: "We made it! Do you think this thing will hold together?"
 ======Panel 2======
-Steve: "Don`t worry Beaver, meringue integrit is at 98 percent and holding.."<br />
+Inside view of the spaceship. Steve is checking the readings on a piece of cake, there's a "GRAVY" container in the background and some chicken legs can be seen on the left.<br />
-Beaver reponds while floating in space: "Wait, what's that?"
+Steve: "Don't worry Beaver, [[Wikipedia:meringue|meringue]] integrity is at 98 percent and holding.."<br />
 ======Panel 3======
-Both look out of the ship`s window.<br />
+Both look out of the ship's window, where a strange object can be seen in the distance.<br />
 Steve: "There's nothing on the radar..."<br />
-Beaver: "It'.. No, it can't be..."
+The radar is BLANK!<br />
 ======Panel 4======
-They both see a Giant Shoe Rack! Indeed.<br />
+The object is now closer and looks like a giant shoe rack.<br />
 Beaver: "It is! It's a giant shoe rack!"<br />
-Steave: "That's noe shoe rack...That's a space station!"<br />
+Steave: "That's no shoe rack... That's a space station!"<br />
 Steve offers Beaver some jelly from the jelly-made radar.<br />
-Steve: "Jelly?".
+Steve: "Jelly?"<br />
 ==Fun Facts==
-Spaceships made of food can really fly and travel through space!
+*Spaceships made of food can really fly and travel through space!
 ==References==

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 ==References==
 *In Star Wars: A New Hope, Obi-Wan exclaims, "That's no Moon.  It's a space station."  The last line is a reference to that.
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