Comic 186 - Revision history

Pcj at 19:07, 9 July 2006

2006-07-09T19:07:51Z

60.50.58.75 at 05:10, 3 June 2006

2006-06-03T05:10:39Z

Strokend: /* Fun Facts */

2006-06-02T21:47:21Z

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2006-06-02T21:44:23Z

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82.157.48.120 at 21:41, 2 June 2006

2006-06-02T21:41:45Z

Strokend: /* Fun Facts */

2006-06-02T21:34:07Z

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Justas at 19:14, 2 June 2006

2006-06-02T19:14:08Z

82.3.32.74: /* Fun Facts */

2006-06-02T19:10:48Z

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 '''Title:''' baking up trouble - part 4
-'''Date:''' June 2, 2006
+'''Date:''' [[June]] 2, 2006
 '''Summary:''' Beaver & Steve travel far through many dangers to get to the Archaeopteryx.

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 ======Panel 2======
-Beaver and Steve SWING! with a rope over a hole full of ten pandas MEW'ing and stretching up to them.
+Beaver and Steve SWING! with a rope over a hole full of eleven pandas MEW'ing and stretching up to them.
 ======Panel 3======
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 *Beaver now seems to be the... Brainless one. Hopefully, for Steve's sake, he's once more correct... Though he WAS wrong about the ''Just Pugs'' calendar.
 * There apears to be an elephant wearing a hat in the back of the 3rd panel.
-*There IS a tenth panda cub, though it is hard to see.
+*There IS an eleventh panda cub, though it is hard to see.
 *The frog in the swamp is wearing a crown.

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 * There apears to be an elephant wearing a hat in the back of the 3rd panel.
 *There IS a tenth panda cub, though it is hard to see.
 ==References==

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 *Beaver now seems to be the... Brainless one. Hopefully, for Steve's sake, he's once more correct... Though he WAS wrong about the ''Just Pugs'' calendar.
 * There apears to be an elephant wearing a hat in the back of the 3rd panel.
 ==References==

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 ======Panel 2======
-Beaver and Steve SWING! with a rope over a hole full of nine pandas MEW'ing and stretching up to them.
+Beaver and Steve SWING! with a rope over a hole full of ten pandas MEW'ing and stretching up to them.
 ======Panel 3======

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 *The archaeopteryx is apparently not extinct.
 *Pandas are a dangerous trap that one must avoid in order to get to an archaeopteryx.
 ==References==

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 __NOTOC__
 '''Link:''' {{Comic|186}}
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 '''Date:''' June 2, 2006
-'''Summary:''' Beaver & Steve travels far trought lots of dangers, to get to the Archaeopteryx
+'''Summary:''' Beaver & Steve travel far through many dangers to get to the Archaeopteryx.
-'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Frog]], [[Gang of panda's]], [[archaeopteryx]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Frog]], [[Pandas|Gang of pandas]], [[Archaeopteryx]]
 '''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[WADE]]", "[[SWING|SWING!]]", "[[MEW]]", "[[CLIMB]]", "[[KAAA|KAAA!]]"
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 ======Panel 1======
-<And so...><br />
+[And so...]<br />
-Picture showing beaver WADE'ing throught swamp, and Steve following with only top head visible.
+Picture showing Beaver WADE'ing throught swamp, and Steve following with only the top of his head visible.<br />
 ======Panel 2======
-Beaver holds an rope(and Steve holds onto him)SWING!'ing over a hole with pandas(9 of them I counted) MEW'ing and streatching up to Beaver and Steve.
+Beaver and Steve SWING! with a rope over a hole full of nine pandas MEW'ing and stretching up to them.
 ======Panel 3======
-Beaver climbs up a cliffside with CLIMB's and beaver is tied in a rope, hanging after him.
+Beaver CLIMB's up a cliffside with Steve hanging on a rope tied to him.
 ======Panel 4======
-Beaver & Steve reaches the top, seeing the silhuette of the Archaeopteryx.<br />
+Beaver & Steve reach the top and see the silhuette of the Archaeopteryx.<br />
-Beaver: "Atlast! We've reached the home of the worlds most incalculably wise individval: The Archaeopteryx.<br />
+Beaver: "Atlast! We've reached the home of the world's most incalculably wise individual: The Archaeopteryx."<br />
-I wonder what juicy wriggling grubs of knowledge he will feed into the gaping maw of our minds today?"<br />
+Beaver: "I wonder what juicy wriggling grubs of knowledge he will feed into the gaping maw of our minds today?"
-−
 ======Panel 5======
-Picture showing a green Archaeopteryx KAAA!'ing loudly.
+Picture showing a green and slightly crazy-looking Archaeopteryx KAAA!'ing loudly.
 ======Panel 6======
 Beaver: "It is truly humbling to be in the presence of such stupefying wisdom..."<br />
-Steve: "I am going back to the swamp."
+Steve: "I am going back to the swamp."<br />
 ==Fun Facts==
-*The Archaeopteryx are appareantly not dead yet(since all other dinosaurs are dead)<br />
+*The archaeopteryx is apparently not extinct.
-*Pandas, are a dangerous trap that must be avoided to get to a Archaeopteryx<br />
+*Pandas are a dangerous trap that one must avoid in order to get to an archaeopteryx.
-*Steve is lazy, since he wont help beaver climbing.<br />
-*The Archaeopteryx look very tired.<br />
-*Steve prefers the swamp, instead of the Archaeopteryx
-*Steve do not think about the horrors the daemon does to the cake-tin, home in their house.
 ==References==
-Reference to Archaeopteryx
+*The [[Wikipedia:Archaeopteryx|Archaeopteryx]] is a real pre-historic bird.
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