Comic 137 - Revision history

Pcj at 12:02, 9 July 2006

2006-07-09T12:02:32Z

80.126.32.62: /* Fun Facts */

2005-12-20T00:16:19Z

Fun Facts

169.236.43.186: /* Panel 9 */

2005-12-19T22:11:21Z

Panel 9

169.236.43.186: /* Panel 7 */

2005-12-19T22:08:23Z

Panel 7

Justas at 20:38, 19 December 2005

2005-12-19T20:38:59Z

Justas: /* Fun Facts */ There's no shading (yet) because James didn't have enough time to do it before uploading the comic. It will be replaced with the shaded version eventually.

2005-12-11T22:49:43Z

Fun Facts: There's no shading (yet) because James didn't have enough time to do it before uploading the comic. It will be replaced with the shaded version eventually.

62.55.107.166: /* Fun Facts */

2005-12-11T22:44:40Z

Fun Facts

80.126.32.62: /* Fun Facts */

2005-12-10T13:52:59Z

Fun Facts

68.36.80.173 at 04:36, 10 December 2005

2005-12-10T04:36:07Z

Justas at 14:48, 9 December 2005

2005-12-09T14:48:45Z

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 '''Title:''' Making the moth't of things - part 3
-'''Date:''' December 9, 2005
+'''Date:''' [[December]] 9, 2005
 '''Summary:''' The moth tricks Steve and breaks free, only to burn to death horribly.

â† Older revision		Revision as of 00:16, 20 December 2005
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	*The moths are revealed to have a secret base on the moon, which is why they all want to get back there.		*The moths are revealed to have a secret base on the moon, which is why they all want to get back there.
−	*Moths are in fact green and purple, but here are drawn brown so not to clash wih the colour of Steve's eyeliner.
	*The Heavy book contains a picture of an anvil, and probably more heavy things.		*The Heavy book contains a picture of an anvil, and probably more heavy things.

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 [Meanwhile, on the moon...]<br />
-Moth Navigator: "Sorry sir, agent X4421 didn't make it..."<br />
+Moth Navigator: "Sorry sir, Agent X4421 didn't make it..."<br />
 Moth Commander: "What happened?"<br />
 Moth Navigator: "Candle, Sir..."<br />

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 Moth: "To the moooo..."<br />
 The moth's wing catches fire from the candle with a WOOMP!<br />
-Moth: "Oh! Argh! The beautiful light! It burns! IT BURNS!"
+Moth: "Oh! Augh! The beautiful light! It burns! IT BURNS!"
 ======Panel 8======

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 '''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Agent X4421]], [[Moths]]
-'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[RUB]]", "[[SWIPE!]]", "[[FLIT!]]", "[[WOOMP!]]", "[[SIZZLE]]", "[[PAF!]]"
+'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[RUB]]", "[[SWIPE|SWIPE!]]", "[[FLIT|FLIT!]]", "[[WOOMP|WOOMP!]]", "[[SIZZLE]]", "[[PAF|PAF!]]"
 '''"[[Fin]]" style:''' Written on a moth

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 *Moths are in fact green and purple, but here are drawn brown so not to clash wih the colour of Steve's eyeliner.
 *The Heavy book contains a picture of an anvil, and probably more heavy things.
 ==References==

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 __NOTOC__
 '''Link:''' {{Comic|137}}
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 '''Summary:''' The moth tricks Steve and breaks free, only to burn to death horribly.
-'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]]
+'''Cast:''' [[Beaver]], [[Steve]], [[Agent X4421]], [[Moths]]
-'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[RUB RUB!]]", "[[SWIPE!]]", "[[FLIT!]]", "[[RUB]]", "[[WOOMP!]]", "[[SIZZLE]]", "[[PAF!]]"
+'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[RUB]]", "[[SWIPE!]]", "[[FLIT!]]", "[[WOOMP!]]", "[[SIZZLE]]", "[[PAF!]]"
-'''"[[Fin]]" style:''' Written on a Moth
+'''"[[Fin]]" style:''' Written on a moth
 '''Number of panels:''' 9
 <br clear="all" />
-==Transcript========Panel 1======
+==Transcript==
-Steve: Y-You live on... Fear?<br />
+======Panel 1======
 Moth: Oh, did I say fear? I meant...
 ======Panel 2======
-Moth: BOOGA BOOGA!<br />
+Moth: "BOOGA BOOGA!"<br />
-Steve: YAAAA!
+Steve: "YAAAA!"
 ======Panel 3======
-Moth: Oh yum yum, your fear is tasty like chocolate cheesecake. I can tell I will grow very fat while I am living here...
+The moth RUB RUB's his stomach.<br />
 ======Panel 4======
-Moth: FOREVER!
+Moth: "...FOREVER!"
 ======Panel 5======
-Steve: YAAAA!<br />
+Steve: "YAAAA!"<br />
-Moth: Ha ha! Free! Now I can head for my true goal... the MOON
+Steve SWIPE!'s the [[Heavy Book]] off the glass; the moth FLIT!'s away.<br />
 ======Panel 6======
-Moth: To the moon!<br />
+The moth flies towards Beaver, who is coming with a [[candle]] and wearing a [[sleeping hat]] and [[pink bunny slippers]]. He looks sleepy and is RUB'ing his eye.<br />
-Beaver: Now now, what's all this commotion?
+Moth: "To the moon!"<br />
 ======Panel 7======
-Moth: To the moooo...<br />
+Moth: "To the moooo..."<br />
-Oh! Argh! The beautiful light! It burns! IT BURNS!
+The moth's wing catches fire from the candle with a WOOMP!<br />
 ======Panel 8======
-Moth: The mooooooooon... akh.
+Moth: "The mooooooooon..."<br />
 ======Panel 9======
-Commentary: Meanwhile, on the moon...<br />
+[Meanwhile, on the moon...]<br />
-Moth Navigator: Sorry sir, agent X4421 didn't make it...<br />
+Moth Navigator: "Sorry sir, agent X4421 didn't make it..."<br />
-Moth Sir: What happened?<br />
+Moth Commander: "What happened?"<br />
-Moth Navigator: Candle, Sir...<br />
+Moth Navigator: "Candle, Sir..."<br />
-Moth Sir: Dammit! How many more agents do we have to lose before we can defeat this menace? How many??
+Moth Commander: "Dammit! How many more agents do we have to lose before we can defeat this menace? How many??"
 ==Fun Facts==
-*Moths are infact green and purple, but here are drawn brown so not to clash wih the colour of Steve's eyeliner.
+*The moths are revealed to have a secret base on the moon, which is why they all want to get back there.
 *The Heavy book contains a picture of an anvil, and probably more heavy things.
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