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'''Link:''' {{Comic|104}}

'''Translations:''' {{Translations}}

'''Title:''' Steve's unfeasible afterlife adventure - part 15

'''Date:''' August 29, 2005

'''Summary:''' Steve strikes horror upon his own sins by devouring them one by one.

'''Cast:''' [[Steve]], [[sins|Steve's sins]]

'''[[:Category:Onomatopoeias|Onomatopoeias]] used:''' "[[SCOFF|SCOFF!]]", "[[FLEE|FLEE!]]", "[[SWIRL|SWIRL!]]", "[[SCREEEE]]", "[[BLAHH|BLAHH!]]", "[[BLAPP]]", "[[FWIP|FWIP!]]"

'''Number of panels:''' 7
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==Transcript==

======Panel 1======

Steve is shoving one of his sins into his mouth ''(SCOFF!)'' as he grabs a second one, other sins flee in terror ''(FLEE!)''.

======Panel 2======

A purple colored portal of sorts appears ''(SWIRL!)'' behind Steve and he is surprised, turning his head.

======Panel 3======

The portal sucks Steve's tail in and he subsequently drops the sin he was holding.<br>
Steve: "Oh!"

======Panel 4======

Steve spirals into the portal, digging his fingers into the ground ''(SCREEEE)'' as he tries to escape it. The sin he had dropped makes a sigh of relief.<br>
Steve: "No! I don't want to go! I want to... stay in hell!"

======Panel 5======

Steve can't hold on and spirals further into the portal, latching out his tounge ''(BLAHH!)'' and grabbing the dropped sin ''(BLAPP)''.

======Panel 6======

Steve, now gone completely pulls the sin into the portal after him, three other sins gather around and watch.

======Panel 7======

The portal dissapears ''(FWIP!)'' and the middle sin comments. <br>
Sin: "Let's not tell the boss about this..."

==Fun Facts==

None.

==References==

One of the sins in the first panel strikes a stunning resemblance to [[wikipedia:Disney]]'s [[wikipedia:Mickey Mouse]].

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 '''Title:''' Steve's unfeasible afterlife adventure - part 15
-'''Date:''' August 29, 2005
+'''Date:''' [[August]] 29, 2005
 '''Summary:''' Steve strikes horror upon his own sins by devouring them one by one.

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 ======Panel 1======
-Steve is shoving one of his sins into his mouth ''(SCOFF!)'' as he grabs a second one, other sins flee in terror ''(FLEE!)''.
+Steve is SCOFF!'ing one of his sins into his mouth as he grabs a second one, other sins FLEE! in terror.
 ======Panel 2======
-A purple colored portal of sorts appears ''(SWIRL!)'' behind Steve and he is surprised, turning his head.
+A purple colored portal of sorts appears and SWIRL!'s behind Steve. He is surprised, turning his head.
 ======Panel 3======
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 ======Panel 4======
-Steve spirals into the portal, digging his fingers into the ground ''(SCREEEE)'' as he tries to escape it. The sin he had dropped makes a sigh of relief.<br>
+Steve spirals into the portal, digging his fingers into the ground with a SCREEEE noise as he tries to escape it. The sin he had dropped makes a sigh of relief.<br>
 Steve: "No! I don't want to go! I want to... stay in hell!"
 ======Panel 5======
-Steve can't hold on and spirals further into the portal, latching out his tounge ''(BLAHH!)'' and grabbing the dropped sin ''(BLAPP)''.
+Steve can't hold on and spirals further into the portal, latching out his tongue ''(BLAHH!)'' and grabbing the dropped sin ''(BLAPP)''.
 ======Panel 6======
-Steve, now gone completely pulls the sin into the portal after him, three other sins gather around and watch.
+Steve, now gone completely, pulls the sin into the portal after him, three other sins gather around and watch.
 ======Panel 7======
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 ==References==
-One of the sins in the first panel strikes a stunning resemblance to [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mickey_Mouse| Disney's Mickey Mouse].
+*One of the sins in the first panel strikes a stunning resemblance to Disney's [[Wikipedia:Mickey Mouse|Mickey Mouse]].
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 One of the sins in the first panel strikes a stunning resemblance to [[wikipedia:Disney]]'s [[wikipedia:Mickey Mouse]].
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